EDITED WRITING NUMBER ONE

Ounce upon a time there was a young man different to each others, he doesn´t like sports, drink some beers o watch tv.But he likes  all the pretty woman but very fat.One day he find out, to his disapointment his life,kissing to other man, he felt very upset, really ungry and then he took his gun after that gave 3 shots to them, some hours later the polices came and took him by arrest and stood a long time in jail.